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Pale things.

Gruesome and gleeful.

Full of dark joy. Mewling in twisted pleasure.

Covered in tarry blood and foul ichor.

Wicked grins flashing pointed teeth. Tattered bloody lips pulled back. Milky white eyes with no pupils that penetrate the gloom.

Blue Veins barely pulsing underneath pale skin pulled tautly over their bones. Bones pushing out against its skin..

Distorted and Depraved from eating the cold flesh of the formerly living.

They are the anatomy of the terrible and physiology of fear made flesh.

The emaciated beings give off the strange and eerie odor of decay and decomposition, of sickly sweet corruption and bitter grave mould.

The coffin is opened with a groaning creak. Gulping, tearing, slitting, ripping and cracking. Dislocating and chewing echoes in the dark mausoleum in a frenzy.

Cartilage and bones crack wetly. Flesh tears with a sound like wet ripping cloth. The cold flesh is swallowed noisily. Titters of pleasure and shuffling sounds accompany.

Then begins the sucking of bone marrow with long slobbering sounds.

Bloated rats scurry and slaver around the grotesque meal. Pink tails as thick as fingers. They bound around clawed pallid feet for scraps of offal.

Lapping up the cold life fluids of the dead. Whiskers twitching with each gurgling mewling laugh of the feasting wretches.

The light of the moon casts lunatic shadows on the grotesque feast, the degenerate banquet.

Femurs are broken and jawbones clatter. Eyeballs are exquisite, sucked before bursting between pointed teeth.

Intestines are pulled like ropes and livers and stomachs are split. Nothing goes to waste.

Maniacal Laughter echoes across the mausoleum booming full of twisted mirth.

Now for the tenderest portion of all. The skull cracks with the swift blow of a mouldy brick. Beholden the most wondrous of treats. The succulent brain quivers like delicious jelly.

Will you partake? Welcome to the feast!
I read Pickman's model twice then dreamt about some ghouls feasting around a week later. It was rather visceral which is what I tried to capture. They tried to get me to eat a brain, which I think I did eat part of. The visions of a ghoul feast wouldn't leave me alone so I decided to write to calm my imagination or calls from Y'golonac whichever the case. Though I hope it not a case of the latter.

The picture isn't mine by the way, found it online.
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Chaosfive-55 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
If you have not yet added Brian McNaughton's The Throne of Bones to your book collection, you should do so without delay!!!
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Crazygoblin21 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2010
Searching Amazon for it.. hmm...
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Chaosfive-55 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Let me know if you get it!
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Crazygoblin21 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012
I DID, TWO YEARS LATER, I DID. IT'S SO GOOD.
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Chaosfive-55 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconyaayplz: I KNEW you'd love it!!! And now you know where my Comments signature comes from--the motto of the Vendrens!
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shadee Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it when people can make writing so visual and gruesome. It's not often that words can gross you out :)
Well done sir.
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Crazygoblin21 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009
I thank you :bow: any recommendations?
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shadee Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Well I'm not a huge reader. Only just started to get interested in consuming books :)
I did enjoy The Ruins by Scott Smith. It only has a few of those moments though.
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Crazygoblin21 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009
They cut off legs S:
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shadee Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
All I can say is poor Pedro :)
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Crazygoblin21 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009
Did you watch the movie?
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shadee Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Nah, I heard it was pretty bad and wasn't much like the book at all.
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Crazygoblin21 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2009
It was... lacking.
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Nemesis12 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2009
Love it. But some of it's not easy to read when you're eating. And the Ghoul picture at the top is awesome, even if it isn't yours.
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Crazygoblin21 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2009
I aim to please but also to disturb a bit if I can get away with it. I have some other drafts done I should get on them. It isn't mine but it was hard to resist! Thanks for the support! :)

-scuttles off to prowl your gallery-
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Nemesis12 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2009
You're welcome.
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Crazygoblin21 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2009
:bow:
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eyes-wide-shut11 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2009
hehe i will partake
very nice horror writting, should totally do more
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Crazygoblin21 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2009
Thank you :bow:
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eyes-wide-shut11 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2009
very welcome
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slashfilled-mind Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2009
This is seriously cool. You make one awesome horror writer, and the pic is great as well. I love it!
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Crazygoblin21 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2009
You are too kind Miss :bow:
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Draco-7 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2009
Y'golonac? That jerk will never stop calling me! I gave him my number at a party once, and he NEVER hangs up. Seriously. Just block his calls.

Nice writing though.
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Crazygoblin21 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2009
Thanks you sir. Yeah I know and Darkness left me a message but I don't have is number. I also get those harassing calls from Demon Hunters ugh :hmm:
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Draco-7 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2009
Darkness is pretty cool, if it's still the same guy. That job's got a pretty high turnover rate. Most of the time the Demon Hunters will just bug you, but when you're trying to kick a Keeper of Secrets back to the Immaterium, and there are more Bloodletters than you care to deal with right there, the Demon Hunters can be pretty useful. Just don't give them any more information than your phone number, and make sure they can't trace you through that and you should be fine.
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